It's okay, but it did NOT follow the guidelines. A Moderator application must have atleast 100 words, and follow this template:
Name:
In-game name:
Timezone(GMT +/- ?):
Do you play over the night?
Average of time you play a week:
Are you active on the forums:
Why should you be a moderator(100 words minimum, don't repeat yourself):
Thanks-
Ryan